Saturday, January 28, 2012

The Final Rewrite: The Road to Publication

Under Construction

The Importance of Beginnings

Reposted from 2009
The next time you pick up a book and read the first few pages, ask yourself these questions:
– Does the first sentence catch your attention?
– Are the other sentences varied in word length and rhythm?
– Do you feel yourself stepping into the setting and entering the story?
– Do you care what happens next?


If you can answer “Yes” to all four questions, chances are you’re reading a beginning that captures your interest and will lead you into the story. It’s all very well to analyze story openings and to recognize good ones, but it’s a bit more difficult to write one yourself. Here are some rules that I try to follow:

Friday, January 20, 2012

Vignettes

Reposted from 2009
This morning, I want to talk about one of my favorite literary genres: the vignette. The word vignette comes from the same root as "vine" and was first used to describe decorative borders painted in books or along the tops of walls. The illustrations often contained leaves, grapes, and vines. Later, in photography, a vignette came to be known as a portrait that is focused in the center, but blurred at the edges.

Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Wednesday, June 16, 2010
The Swamp
A few weeks ago, I took a look at my workplace. Disastrous! I promised myself I would do something about it -- separate the wheat from the chaff, dig for gold amidst the clutter. In the process of progress, I took time out to create a "found poem" that I want to share. First I took my original blog and cut it in half, then in half again. The idea was to save significant words and phrases, rearranging them until I had the essence of what I was trying to say. In other words, I "found" a poem in the midst of all those words. Here it is: